So I ended up nitpicking the drawing a bunch last night after people gave me a lot of helpful criticism! Thank you very much, y’all :D
Some things I changed:
-Made the light source more uniform for the highlights
-Added the little indent on the helmet to make it more accurate
-Used an actual action figure eye to make a halftone for his eye
-Manually added the glow to his stripes instead of using photoshop
What do you guys think?